I like this poem. I also think that it has really good imagery.

The combination of colours & passion is very catchy, and the poem manages to be vague and yet over-descriptive with all the emphasis on the moodier words. I'm just interested to know: why "Fall of Man"? I think that the title, apart from using the four letters at the end of the poem, the link isn't too clear. (Or maybe it's too early in the morning now for me to see it).

whoa! that was delightfully original and creative.