hahahaha! I remember this! Did you write this for our Creative Writing class? Its a good account

The Basement! This is cool. This reminds me of Indian in the Cupboard or maybe Chronicles of Narnia? Anyways this is the beginning of a great story. Please expand! My favorite part was the ending where it was left open to wonder if it was a dream!

Hm this sounds like it's about a boy friend? I like how you told a story with the bare essentials. You know, the one liners. It's an interesting way!

Fuzzy Dice! I like the title. It's a Ode, that's for sure. I like the line about him almost writing a poem.

It reminds me of the early 90's when everyone in Wisconsin had them... Until they were banned. Sad day.

Good job!

Cool! It reminds me of going on a trip with the evil bugs attacking me! I liked the SkeeterEater... not for pregnant women! Hehehehe! I did not get "Commercial!" line however.

Good job!