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Reviews For: Nothing But a Memory

Accalia Aeryn
2005-11-09
ch 1,
abuseGreat poem! You really put emotions into it. Just amazing writing. -Accalia Aeryn
His Only
2005-09-09
ch 1,
abuseWoahh!! I REALLY like this! Okay ya, it was a little dark and mysterious and kinda disturbing, but I guess thats why I liked it so much. Its awsome. Your analagies are perfect- I love your way of describing the jerks that decide to break our hearts. The first four lines really opened up the poem well. And then the line "my bloody tears, they drown me now"- I LOVE IT!! The whole thing was really really amazing. Great work!! And keep it up!
Alisha Marie
2005-08-28
ch 1,
abuseVery nice...I liked the emotions in this.
Rengae
2005-08-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis is an awesome poem that definitely can describe life as a teen! I would not change anything about this poem...it shows true backbone to write such a powerful message in such a beautiful way.
Kesslyn Rosewood
2005-08-21
ch 1,
abuseGood poem, I can imagine what you're saying here, you're an awesome writer. I can't find anything that I don't like, that's always good!
fading zero
2005-08-12
ch 1,
abusenice going..love the poemshattering glass illusions-gone-
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