Nice, this must be one of the best poems I have ever read. Definitely a fav of mine. But then again, all your poems are real fantastic too!

thanks 4 th previous review! what a sweet simple poem. i love it. :)did the person whos birthday it was read this? i hope so. :)

very well written. and whoever you wrote this for is very lucky. sounds like a good birthday present to me! Very well written! love the happy emotions

Sorrow

Beautiful and very well written. I like this, a very different view and very original. QueenVixta

such a diff outlook on the norm bday poems. a very unique perspective :)

It flows very well and the poem is touching. Good job.

This is pretty!I've been looking at alot of the poetry here today, and it's hard to come by simple, yet honest and well thought out poems. Good stuff.

And brownie points for actually setting it out properly. Very easy to read.

Saxon.(reviews are appreciated)

aww...very sweet, good job. (please review back)