very well written. trees seem to be a perfect spot for romantic stuff. I've seen it so many times! lol great work!

Sorrow

such comfort in this one! such strenght!

Cute :-)

Your line "Softly guard us..." was good except I think the "outside spies, bees, and humans" ruined the flow a bit. Maybe you could shorten it to "outside spies"? Also the "Canopy of Trees, underneath, besides us" confused me. I thought they were under the trees... Anyways, this poem was good, and keep writing! Jessica

Oh. Gosh. I really need to get up the courage and tell the guy I've been after how I feel.

THIS is what I want in a relationship. Beautiful, poetic bliss!

*sigh*

We cannot ever get what we want.

Just a good review once in a while.

Which this was.

Lovely, lovely poem.

Aw that is so sweet!

fyi, your poem 'save me' , i wrote a poem to my crush called 'save me' ! quinkine dope! (;

WRITE ON! (;

sweet and short- just what i needed. Anyways, good job, and keep it up.

-simpleton