Beautiful! I think the way you use lesser known charachters, such as Gna and Ull, is fantastic. I don't normally see things like this. Can't wait to read more!

A very rich story. It kinda reminds me of a teenaged love story with all the gossip and the relationships. Only they are gods. Anyway, decent work on the first few chapters.

brilliantly written! i LOVE norse stuff, so i was gladly pulled into it. i love the style of writing too. Although i was thinking it may give it more pizazz if the prologue was on the same page as chapter one, to set the mood sort of. :-)

Great chapter. I did not realize until Chapter I that it was a story. So was the prologue your own writing, or something quoted from another source? Anyway, Beautiful description. Frey and Gerd are cute together. :)

Intriguing style in this one. Very different from the usual, but I like it. Very epic-like/song-like.