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Reviews For: Dancing on the Ice

umbrius
2005-09-05
ch 1,
abuseJoe: nice

Kyr: I rather enjoyed this one, even more so since there were fewer spelling errors.

Joe: (face palms) goddamn kyr, give it a rest will ya

Kyr: No, not until I see one perfectly written piece, no spelling or grammar errors.

Joe: (shakes head) I apologize for her...
elasandra
2005-08-10
ch 1,
abuseOye, I luv it! Especially the desciptions! They're so...whatstheword...spiritual i guess. I just luv it. IS there more to this? I hope so. Again, well done! Keep up the great work!
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