it makes me wonder..are your love poems related to your real life experiences?

I like this one. *tear* I liked how each line was sort of it's own sentence fragment. It made it more interesting that way. It makes it more...abrupt? I'm not sure if that's the word. There's just something about it that I really like. Great job!

Interesting, so the girl or narator of the story left a boy behind who should actually be her true love because her friend likes him. yeah...I know how that feels (no really, I do) because I usually try to not like the guys I have crushes on foor my friends, who likes them too.

Its really flowy and it fits together! so you shouldn't be unconfident about it! Keep it up!

-E.Taynne

KA WA II! HONTONI KAWAII!! haha... that was touching .. but yet sad! and splendid work kimmy-chan!! :P waa.. u made me proud.. lol!! the rhyming fits perfectly.. and the words flow so well!! WAA.. i donno why but i'm so happy writing this review for u !

U finished the poem wid a strong sentence...

Not knowing the love I’ve left behind

Was true…

waa... i'm so touched!! :D... haha.. i don wanna sound gay now.. so i better stop.. haha

anywayz, glad ur into this poem stuff.. i hope u got influenced by me!! MUAHAHAHA! hope to chat wid u soon.. and sorry for not replyin ur letter yet XD... got alot of stuff goin on.. ok!!

-peace out!! stay cool

Cool poem, very true. You really won't know anything until you try. It sounded kinda different to me but, of course, thats just me. Nice.