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I'm stalkin'

I'm stalkin'

I'm stalkin' this story.

>_O; You. Monkey. Creature. Thing. Luff-her. WRITE.

-nag-

-nag-

-bug-

-bother-

very well done! kudos! some great descriptions in this. i liked those especially, everything was very clear and i didnt once get confused. careful tho numbers should always be written out: "ten" instead of 10. and usually it's best not to use bold in the actual story, just a small note. it'll be interesting to see the characters continue

~Mack

Very interesting ... I'm curious as to what happens next. Update soon! ^__^

~ Lunchi

OH WOW! Miya this is.. like..-shock- Wow. I wanna read more. PLEASE WRITE MORE! -whimpers and clings to your leg- Please, Please, Please, please!! T_T

Anyways, Truely a great story. Had me sitting on the edge of my chair near the end of the chapter. Yes, You must write more. I wanna know what happens next.