I love the perception of this poem. The tone is very deep and spiritual. It has a lot of meaning that many humans do not percieve in their daily lives.

Wow! You seem to be very talented in writing poetry. Very deep message. I like it!

Hmm. Deep. I especially liked the message about how people perceive something is how everything seems.

That is quite profound. Your writing style is great, even if it isn't structured like you commented on mine. Poetry isn't about structure, it's about feeling. I think you conveyed your feeling very well, and shared your wisdom with us all. Thanks!