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| SomethingSymbolic15 2005-10-13 ch 1, | abuseOh man (or woman :D) That was really good...I so wish I had your talent! You use perfect words, you ryme, and your poems are unbeatable! Keep up your good work! And I get the Isaac thing...isn't it from the Bible when Isaac had to scarifice is only son that he had waited for for so long? ya, I think it is...anyways, thanks for the good read! -W4J |
| Needa S 2005-08-16 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully done! God Bless ya. Keep'em coming. Needa S. |
| simpleplan13 2005-08-12 ch 1, | abusevery nice... im not a fan of hte double spacing though... nicely done |
| Rach (the sick one...lol) 2005-08-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey babe...its me the other Rach (the one who is sick, lol, remember?) Sweetie, this is so super good. Now, all it needs is someone to sing it...hm you! |
| tainted x love 2005-08-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is truly beautiful. |