I like the idea of a girl unaware of her not good writing. i like that she writes because thats what she wants to do. I like the image of her sitting there - in her dress or in something different. just writing. that to me speaks of all innocent

~Mack

your last lines are be-youu-tiful. nice sequel :)

This poem may not have a point, but it's still really good.

w00t! reviewing u rt before i leave...ahh! katherines comment! anyways, this poem made me remember that u havent updated ur story since forever, and that i havent updated in forever either^_^ i guess i should say something about the poem cuz this is a review. good poem, i liked it. wahaha, i dont write poetry!