Mm, it is raining right now@ my place. quite a beautiful idea. luv it! (= very deep! WRITE ON!!(=

Well thats a nice love poem, but isn't it a "pain poem"? Anyways thanks for the review, I generally try to make odd tittles! Nice poem!

Wow, this is really great. I like it.

A little cliché, but still nice. And sad.

wow, i can completely relate to this! i can only hope~

keep writing!

Oh wow. The double-lined stanzas, (probably called doublets, or some other fancy name; but I forget hehe)are eye-catching. The lines "Tonight we'll be reunited/and the birds will be our bridge" was moving, for me. The title makes me think too, it's ominous but the poem itself is hopeful (until the last line of course). Nicely done.

ah, it's been a while since I've reviewed anyone. Look, I seriously think that your poetry is in a desperate need of some originality. My criticism is not aimed towards your idea, but your poetry period. From now on, I'm only going to be reviewing poetry that's worthy enough to be reviewed. As I said before, you show promise so I'm going to be checking up on you frequently. Chin up, and keep walking forward. ~ ADD`

I like this... I can relate... bc im in a long distance relationship... interesting fact about the chines lunar calendar

The poem is so sad, but it's so good.

In the end, did you ask for a lover? ;) Heh, sorry, none of my business. But great poem!

god, Sumi-chan. you get better with each and every piece you write. that is just so deep and nicely excuted. :D I love your word use, even for such a short piece this still enthralled me. love it so much, the last lines in parenthesis are so fitting. well done, sumi-chan. you are always getting better and this shows that.

now you got me into Chinese mythology! *groans* that means more work to do, and I'm a damn procrastinator as it is. -__-; I'm really interested in it, I think I'll look it up some where later today ... or tomorrow. see ya!

~* noelle

That's so sad, but so cool how you based it on a myth. Keep writing!