i quite like this story it sounds really interesting,i can't wait to read more ^^

Arrg! You need to update this!!

Scarily well written and majorly exciting. If I could bribe you to write another chapter then I would :)

Please consider continuing *puppy eyes*

Love H xx

I really liked the plot twist and Luc being the king's son!
Well, the deceased king's son.

Can't wait for more plot and m/m!

this story is awesome. so much intrigue...I look foward to reading more.

please update soon!

I'm surprised the plan worked. I wonder what Luc is going to do with Ailyn. Thanks for the update!

Gross! But good =P Keep updating please

Woot! Can't wait to read more

Your story is a lot of fun. Thanks for the update!

I love this chapter. The story's getting really interesting now that it's actually heading into something that seems more complex.

nice! Good characters and the plot is getting intriguing. To make page breaks, press 'edit' next to the document in the document manager. On the edit page there will be an icon with a line on it (next to the underline and bold) press that and a nice line will appear on your page :)

PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like to see what happen next.

ah, an update! yay. adrian sounds really hot. =x poor him, though. killing the king sounds like a good idea at this point.

Hi,

I just finished reading these 6 chapters and I just wanted to tell you that it's really well written, except a few spelling error which you will fix later! but very well written and nice!

too many relationships and I can't guess who will go with whom at the end! you know I mean 3 people have the potential to be with Ailyn. Adrian, Luc and James!

Well I guess I have to wait and see!

Thanks for sharing and please update soon! ;)

i really like your story so far and hope you keep writing it!!

Hah. I like it. It's adorable.