Beautifully written! I loved it all. Great Job!

Favorite lines: "the waves of optimism are dancing across the window shade"

"and the wave of satin around my skin"

Even the last line... beautifully written! Great job! ^^

I really like this. Beautiful imagery all the way through.

~Ellesmere~

& thnx 4 tha review=)

Hey!

Okay, where exactly does death come in? Was it the dead bug? Optimism, spinning round and round, covering your body. You speak of it like it's some kind of disgusting disease! Or maybe some kind of monster that will swallow you whole, and turn you into something you're not. Great job! I like it!

Luv ya,Tashi :)