so true... when i was in my teenage years, felt the same way...

just wanna correct the grammar though, with all due respect, your use of "you're" in this poem should be "your" i think.

anyway, i like your writing so keep it up! let the emotions flow... :)

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it's like you're in denial of yourself... i was able to relate with the poem cause that's how i always feel... it's like you're trying to tell me that i must be very cautious of what i feel all the time... it gives that kind of message to the readers...nice work! keep it up!and thanks for reviewing my work! i hope it happens again! God Bless! :>

I very much prefer the risk of pain as opposed to not living.

I feel the same way, though i still don't know which is truly better.