sweet...

keep on writing! :)

* ner *

honestly, that's a double WOW!it's like you really have the talent with these kind of stuffs! i really liked the way how the poem ran... at first i thought it would be the same kind of boring poem like i sometimes read but as i went on, i noticed the beauty of it... i felt the need to be loved by someone like what your main character here talks about...you got to post more! good job! keep it up! :>

Nice... Simply nice.

aw, so beautiful. and it rhymes too. go you! yet, tis still so beautiful *wipes imaginary tear away* *pause* it's getting too late for this...

Aww... Me likes. It's all happy and junk. :)