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| Satyrica 2006-11-12 ch 5,  | abusethis is muy bueno dahling. i like the connection that she likes the color green and his eyes are green...i can't wait till they meet! one thing (though it was actually in the last chapter) - you use the word "regarded" in some way three times in one sentence (when you are talking about the importance of their classes). mucho luvins -leeny |
| ThInkInGoFyOu233 2006-11-11 ch 4, | abuseThis is really great! I can't figure out who she should be with! Well see when the new guy gets here! |
| gabby 2006-04-06 ch 3, anon. | abusevery intersting! |
| kAIT REDFERN 2005-09-06 ch 3, | abuseThis was light hearted, introduced us to some new possibly important people and again discussed her predicatablity. No matter what is may say there is no denying that her friends are right. We already know she has to plan anything and spur of the moment doesn't exactly appeal to her. But I have a feeling her partner may be able to help her with the predicatable issue. Maybe even teach her a few things. By the way do you accept anon reviews? Check your settings. If you accept them you may find more reviews come in. Luv Kaitx |
| kAIT REDFERN 2005-09-02 ch 2, | abuseI like Moxie she seems the type of girl that will be able to beat the guys at anything(even if Ban is has been given a higher status in the pilot stakes.) Behind her surface hatred I sense lust and that always makes for entertaining reading and verbal sparring. You described her love of flying well and her thoughts at the beginning were slightly amusing. Of all the people to be paired with they had to go and pick him! I think I am going to enjoy this so please update soon. Luv Kaitx |