wow! to tell you honestly, i felt what you wrote... i know fire could be such a beauty that it could tempt you to touch it... but what you wrote here was as if you want to be part of it, and that, my friend is way cool... being the fire could somehow make you superior, right?fire is ever-changing, ever-moving, it has it's own beauty only those who see it appreciates...great job! i really like it! this is honestly going into my faves list... :>

i think that this is one of the most best poems i've ever read. wow. keep it up.

You CAN touch it, but are you ready for the pain that comes?

It seems like it ended a bit too suddenly...abruptly is a better word...I can't explain it really. Maybe add another - this time special - verse about its power over you.

Just telling you my opinion!