Reviews for Princess and Prophet

Reviews For: Princess and Prophet

Danae 2006-02-17 ch 7,	This story is so awesome!! I can't wait to read more!!
Dire sphinx 2006-01-27 ch 2,	Hey I think this was great. Keep it up. The descr is good
Ara Verloren 2006-01-12 ch 1,	wow you are doing a great job with this story, i look forward to the next chapter! ^_^ -Ara
Marlee Grace 2005-12-19 ch 5,	This was a wonderful story. I can tell that you have a lot of passion for your writing. Keep the stories coming!
Bloodflower 2005-12-16 ch 5,	Now there's something I'd have trouble doing with my Apollo and Cassandra -- having him actually FEEL for her. It's not a criticism of what you've done, I actually think that's a very GOOD thing to do. But for me, the context in which I'm trying to set the story has to call for Cassandra being as much a protagonist as I can make her -- and as much as I dislike doing it, it means, for me, to make Apollo less of a nice person and more of an exploitative b-. Not that that's what I think he OUGHT to be portrayed as, but... Well, I was just going to say well done and it's very good and keep writing.
RedChild 2005-08-29 ch 3,	WOAH! Way cool...update it! It's really good.:)
Cate 2005-08-27 ch 1,	I have just read a book about the princess Cassandra! This story you have written is really good! You are a very talented writer!
Bloodflower 2005-08-25 ch 2,	Well done. This is a really, REALLY, bloody hard scene to write. I've written it in at least five different ways, and it's just - HARD to capture the essence of both the characters. There are some issues like you forgot to add on the r in your...so yeah, give it another check perhaps...but then I do that all the time so I'm being hypocritical. I like the fact that you actually have Cassandra hoodwink Apollo into giving her the gift - I haven't done that, but then I have to admit that I'm sort of partial to the Archer God...like I think Cassandra is Amazing with a Caps-A, and I think Apollo's Awesome with another Caps-A - but I don't know, the fact that I have to make him 'evil' in this scene always makes me not want to make Cassandra able to get the better of him. Wait, now I'm rambling. Well done, well-written - keep going!
Shiko87 2005-08-24 ch 1,	OOh, cool intro. I'm a big fan of Cassandra so when I saw this I just had to give it a shot. Good beginning, it draws you right in and now I'm off to the next one, yay!
TrojanPrincess 2005-08-20 ch 1,	Me again. I can't type. Thge url is: http://w.bluestarlight.net/cassandra
TrojanPrincess 2005-08-20 ch 2,	Lovely story. I love it when people write about Cassandra, I run the fanlisting for her:http://w.bluestarlight.net/cassandraCome by and see the site!
Sarika 2005-08-18 ch 1,	I love stories about the Trojan War. And Cassandra of Troy is one of my favorite characters from the myth. I like how you started off with something short. I suppose it draws people in more quickly that way. The opening is also eye-catching. Maybe you could have incorporated some sort of twist to the legend, because everyone already knows who Cassandra is. But every retelling is different nonetheless and I know yours will be no exception. As for grammar: some commas and such were placed a little ackwardly. I think 'retched' should be 'wretched'. The way you ended this made it sound like the beginning of an epic so I'll be sure to come back when you update and see where it goes! Thanks for your reviews. - Sarika
Bloodflower 2005-08-16 ch 1,	I like your prologue. Like, I really like your prologue, I like the rhythm and stuff. You've got a few spelling errors, namely 'prophet' in your title, and 'wretched' in one of your lines (I'm a bit of a spelling Nazi...actually a bit of a Nazi anyway when it comes to Cassandra, though my story needs a total rewrite...) and, oh, you want 'lose my life' instead of 'loose my life'. "My loving brother Hector, would fall..." as somebody told me a few weeks ago, you don't really need the comma splice. I'll stop nitpicking...it's not realy the grammar and spelling that counts in a good story, it's the story that counts. And as far as I'm concerned, once you've sunk your teeth into Cassandra you have a good story by default. I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with her, because there's a LOT you can do with her.
citrus raindrops 2005-08-12 ch 1,	your story is very different from the ones that i usually read which is a nice change. that'll be cool to be able to see into the future but it'll probably drive me nuts in a way lol anyway, great start :D

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