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| A Wandering Thought 2007-11-25 ch 1,   | First things first: You kind of combined 'untainted' with 'unstained' in the second to last sentence in the second paragraph. Other than that, I saw no other spelling/grammar mistakes. Complete? Aw, now you've gotten me curious. I want to learn more about the world, it's magic, people, demons, etc. But I guess I'll never know for sure, and I'll have to be satisfied with that. It was an excellent read. |
| elasandra 2005-08-11 ch 1, | Lovely, just lovely. Keep up the great work. i luv the descriptions, just beautiful. Update soon! |