good sounds like you really dont like the person

Tear.

I've felt this way too.

"Home-made cake smells nice and sweet/Take my heart and mix it in the blender"

Reminds me especially of my experience.

dep

and dont fear to swear! its part of the english language.

it really rocked...really

I luuv this poem! Sounds like you were kinda in that mood, I understand. Ty for the nicest review eva, and keep writing!

-Miss Shazzay

wow...that was deep...i can relate tho. good...i think...well, good poem, but i dont want u 2 get all pissed and stuff...

wow! *stunned speechless*. i can only say that this has some very strong emotions in it and despite the swears, i love it! although, i think u should check out ur middle verses a bit. the rhyming and rhythm is awesome and i cant say how much the vocab contributes to this. it's written really well with a pure raging passion behing it. love the last line, awesome:-) mez