its not your best work, but its good its a tad too long and you say how long too much in it other than that its great

Nice touch and I like the format of each verse. I could imagine the music playing as I read it. Lovely piece. QueenVixta

This is awesome, great work!

Whoa. It flow nicely and gets the job done. I think you keep on getting better at this. Can't wait for the next one.