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| Twilight Starr 2008-06-30 ch 1,   | Poor girl. She definitely sounds obsessed. It was well written. Great job! Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| DUI on Christie Road 2007-02-09 ch 1, | wow, good job with the subtle build-up of her obsession. it was even more obsessive for me to read because my name is Sara. good work! |
| oh.midge 2005-12-22 ch 1, | i really like this. it is an interesting way to write the ohone call.depicts the girls one sides feeling very well~failinggrace |
| Azzandra 2005-09-23 ch 1, | Muahaha. Now this is funny. Kinda makes me sympathise with poor Sam. |
| Ashscythe 2005-08-12 ch 1, | Very subtle! I like it! Never been obssessed with anything myself, except cookies but that's not my fault, they probably put caffene in there or something! Er...anyways, poor Sara and poor Sam for not liking Sara in that way and being harassed by Sara. It's all very complicated isn't it. |
| CK Shorty 2005-08-11 ch 1, | Good start so far. I liked it. Keep up the good work CK:) |