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| RandomEuphoria 2005-10-11 ch 1,  | abuseI like this, as I relate to it. It's also really well written. I like the transition from clown to magician... or I guess the revelation of the magician behind the clown. What got me the most though was the seccond line. I like the direct question. |
| Kicking Poe 2005-08-21 ch 1, | abuseInteresting format for a poem, but it works well this way. It's hard to tell which POV is which (every other line?) so I would recommend italicizing or bolding one - but, on the other hand, its great this way too. Good job. |