Ha- brilliant! It really did make me laugh at loud!

- Pricilla Grey

He he nice ending to a good poem. Well structued and rhymed, this flowed very naturally, but the content was best of all. I personally love happy endings but it doesn't mean everything should be clear sailing for the heroes, or that everything's painted in black or white. But you knew that. Congrats for a thoroughly enjoyable poem.

i love the idea and the examples. THey rhymes were good but sounded a little ittle bit forced. It was good but the style of writing was a little hard to read for me. Anway, enjoyable to read.

Great poem! THe rhyming is infectious and flows excellently and while I think the part about going past the stereotypes should have been longer, it was all very well-phrased. "Sidekicks and mentors are all safe and sound/While villains lie cold six feet under the ground" I think just "underground" would sound better. But anyways, awesome!!

...You have fantastic humor poetry! Great rhyming: the flow didn't seem strange anywhere at all. I found this amusing, and way too true. And now I feel the need to write about a knight kissing a maid who turns into a toad. But I won't.

no! it rhymes! i hate you. you're brilliant. the poem is brilliant. and it's fun. ^^

This poem had me laughing so hard. I thought it was hilarious. I agree with Mack about the lines from "Or our hero's a woman" to "she turns into a toad"; that had me rolling.

~Ty

AHAHA it's too true, there's no more to say about it. Great poem though. I still have the rhythm and rhyme bouncing around my head.

okay, you got me, this is going on my favs page. It started out a little blah, a little okay. Nothing bad at all - actually important for the end to be so cool. From "Or our hero's a woman" to "she turns into a toad." - last line was especially wonderful. Oh this really is so good!

~Mack

Wow. This poem is awesome. The rhyming flowed really well, and that's unusual to see. I loved your choice of words, too, it added nicely to the rhythm.

And the ending was very good, bringing the poem to a complete close. I loved it.

w00t! i liked this poem, especially the last line. i guess our circle story could be considered an unconventional fairytale...sort of. NIF!

That was greatness! It was the epitome of greatness! I absolutely loved it. Zero fault with this at all.

Fabulous!

Unconventional Fairy tales Rock! you rock too. i luved your poem!! can i have your autograph, please!

Yeah, I'm tired of the stereotype too, but I can't helping loving them...sometimes it's best to escape reality and drown in the stereotypes sometimes. I'm way too critical usually. Lol. Keep up the great work, nice vocabulary. I like your writing style!

Very cute and lyrical. I love it!