Ah... an example of good optimism.

Teehee. I hope you don't feel like I'm being a terribly harsh reviewer. I'm just... putting in effort for once. Because I'm too tired to do it half-assed like usual. Got tired of saying just "good job. I like it."

But yeah... Out of the 3 of your poems I've read so far, I think this one flows the best. There are a few word choices I would change, but that's just out of personal preference.

Thanks for the review.

~ashke~

*Hearts it*

I really liked this poem. It was really easy to tell the kind of feelings that are in it.

This poem on aftermath of a relationship is pretty good. I like how it shows while there is bad that there can be good stuff to come from it if you look hard enough.