it is good

I’ve been drunk on the emotions of a sculpture./Freak.

And

Bloody Murder!/the ghost giggled.

Its thrilling in its pace. Very well constucted. Great job.

the constant format change takes away from the overall image, but its pretty all the same_

wow its just... incredible. i love the one line stanza the most: freak. it just works, so well.

"I've been drunk on the emotions of a sculpture."

"With small talk and a Webster's Dictionary."

...wow.

"the-rapist" "the ghost giggled" "I’m leaving, leave, live –ing./With small talk and a Webster’s Dictionary."

perfection.

i love the ending lines. just something about them caught me.

I'm still not used to this (new) style of yours, though it is both lovely and unique.

'I’ve been drunk on the emotions of a sculpture' - I adore this line, genius.

I'm still trying to take it all in.