|Reviews for Emmaline|
| Jinger-Spice 7/12/07 . chapter 1
Very interesting piece. :)
| Ebony Stars 3/7/06 . chapter 1
this is the fourth reason why you rock. I like the way you cut up words, its nice to see how they fit together :)
| the naked civil servant 2/3/06 . chapter 1
wow... this was very beautiful. i especially loved the unusual depictions - it echoes in my curls/The slur of cake-y, false sincerity... and the last few stanzas are just amazing... :
| a lonely september 12/19/05 . chapter 1
wow. this was so amazing i'm pretty much speechless. wonderful job. . . this was just so real, so there... i felt like i was there. i liked how you took the words & turned them into different words/shortened them to make diff. words... great job.
| dollface and her cancer 11/29/05 . chapter 1
Such a play on words you accomplish.
| citrus scented 10/2/05 . chapter 1
love the ending line. theres something about this...incredible. it really scribbles out the emotions so vividly. fantastic, even.
| like a lover 9/21/05 . chapter 1
oh my god, this was so so great. I adoreed "PRESSING. PRESSING. PRESSING.", it just sounded so perfect and paranoid to me. this was deliciously different. a little mind-blowing. :D
| B. M. Reed 8/27/05 . chapter 1
fantasies are fun. great poem!
| solitaire-for-two 8/22/05 . chapter 1
I adore your use of text styles and spacing to enhance the effects of this piece. Awesome.
'Slimy'. Eugh. Just that word gives me the shivers.
This is intense. Nice work.
| twenty-second seduction 8/18/05 . chapter 1
| lackluster 8/17/05 . chapter 1
the format is very rough. it would seem a bit overdone, but i think it goes great with the words. wonderful!
| Chase William 8/12/05 . chapter 1
Intersesting begining-I WILL keep reading!
Speaking of "Emmaline", I knew someone from camp named Emmaline...never thought I'd see the name again. Heh.