|Reviews for Before You Tell Me Goodbye|
| EmbersAblaze-IgnitedIcicle 8/30/05 . chapter 1
this is beyond my grasp tonight... i added this to my favorite stories over a week ago, yet i did not review it?
my head has been lofty, but that is just loopy. lol okay. i thought this was clever clever clever the first time i read it, and a bit familiar.
tonight it is just very distressing, since i had come to grips with a situation occurring now, and is between the middle and the end of your poem. he knows it, i now know it, but do "we" know it? that is an odd question, isn't it? keep writing on this topic, please...
| atalantea 8/16/05 . chapter 1
Interesting song. I wish I could hear the melody. I can't find the rhythmm but the piece flows beautifully. Nice.
| Rachel Shea 8/16/05 . chapter 1
wow, that's really great. I like the way the words flow and I really like the bridge. good job.
| Muncies2 8/16/05 . chapter 1
Thanks for reviewing. this is an amzing song. its inspiring. there is so much emotion. its refreshing to see someone write something so open. Keep up the good work you are amazing!
| shiva the destroyess 8/15/05 . chapter 1
Bravo...I would say good metaphors, etc...but I know how much u hate that...lol..
| Invalid Night 8/13/05 . chapter 1
Loved how the emotions of the poem flowed into one another. Good job.
| acethehunted 8/13/05 . chapter 1
very good...this is the perfect mix for the poetic story as well as the song form it is written in. good job i dare say.
| Greg M. Schumaker 8/13/05 . chapter 1
Excellent. It made me want to cry...
| HauntedMisery 8/12/05 . chapter 1
WOW, you should enter your songs in a contest, they are amazing, I love this piece! Great job!
| WiltingBlackRose 8/12/05 . chapter 1
| Rozlin 8/12/05 . chapter 1
that was beautiful...
| Roth Jopalse Sammuels 8/12/05 . chapter 1
Really powerful peice about how hard it is to say goodbye, or at least that's how I interpreted it. Great details, personification, and metaphors.