No! How can you leave your readers in such suspence and make it a oneshot?! ;) Have you given up this story completely? Cuz if you haven't I would be willing to be your beta reader

What?
NO!!
Update! ah

i really like this story so far. its really good. tyler and caliber seem pretty cool. and im kicking the person who punched caliber. please rite more!

UPDATE> SOON> PLEASE, please, puh-leeze... UPDATE. This story looks promising. :D

What?!? You said this is a one shot. You are so cruel. YOu can't just start a story like THIS, and LEAVE it. Please update it, lest the flying monkeys become angered. :)

OH! I'll b ur betr reader!! loli really like this story too!!keep going!!lolu r a really good writer and i think u will go far with ur writing!!u rock!!

I like this story and I deffinetly think you should keep it up! I would like to help but I am already terrible at grammer.

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heyy! this was really cool. but what happened to her? did she die? *gasp* i was just wondering...whats a betr reader?

I like it so far.

Wow i am really interested in this story already. I am really curious as to who was getting beat up. I think it would be cool if you did the next chapter in Tyler's POV. Anyways keep writting

~mip*

o wow this story is good! i love it! plz plz plz update soon!

Your story sounds great so far! I can't wait to read more! I hope you update soon!

I like it! Carry it on... even if you have to many... try and make time! xx

I finished HBP in give hours and i would read it over and over and over and over and over. I cant wait till the senventh. Anywho... good chapter, funny. Makes me laugh!