Reviews for Teaspoonfuls of Sugar

Reviews For: Teaspoonfuls of Sugar

ossining 2006-07-07 ch 1,	abuseOMG, I loved this poem in the first place, then you went and added lyrics from Walking In Memphis and I knew, absolutely KNEW, this was going on my faves list. One of my favorite songs of all time. But yes, gorgeous images, silky language...great. Keep writing! :)
wolfeh 2005-10-10 ch 1,	abuseWow... you have SUCH a talent for writing, its unbelievable! Boy, if I could write like you!! ^_^ AWESOME!!
Plinky 2005-10-03 ch 1,	abuseWow, I love this whole poem! Normally I try to highlight lines that i particularly liked, but i liked them all! Beautiful, really lovely. Vivid emotion and pictures. Really lovely! Keep writing.
Selena Benilo 2005-09-19 ch 1,	abuseVery nice; I haven't heard the song in awhile. Inspired by it, yah? I really like the way you write. It's refreshing to what I'm used to.
Winged Lyon 2005-09-11 ch 1,	abuseHey! I know I havn't been on lately. sigh I just have been feeling crative lately. I love the poem. I is so professional. My poetry sounds so immature in comparison... Anyway, about your comment, it is meant to be the bull lows, as in the cow moos, or the baby cries. To 'low' is the old word to 'moo'. Yes?
alexialynne 2005-09-09 ch 1,	abusehey.. firstly, thank u for reviewing my story. unfortunately, i wont be continuing that story..for now. i do hope you would read my other works for the time being k? as for your poem...well..its rather splendid! very good poem. very vivid descriptions.. stunning vocab. :) great job! i'm feeling all sugary and sweet. theres just something about this poem..cant quite pinpoint what.. but the imageries made it rather..erm.. classically elegant. :D
FrozenKiwi 2005-09-01 ch 1,	abuseThis is so great! I loved it! Very vivid... thanks for your latest review, by the way. I don't know where the name poem-fic came from... it just fit.
roselilie 2005-08-23 ch 1,	abuseGreat poem! Keep it up!
mizu no kokoro 2005-08-14 ch 1,	abuseaw... this is sweet~~ cute and makes me feel light and happier~~ great job^^ keep writing!
FunkyFlower17 2005-08-14 ch 1,	abusewow! i ABSOLUTELY love this poem! it has so much detail and descriptions. the imagery is amazing and i can vividly visualise all of this. the vocab is just incredible, no way could i write something like this and also the metaphors u use just emphasise it more. i LOVE the stanza with the line 'like chocolate, smeared across the rosy grin of a little girl'. it's really beautiful in its own way and very well-written, great job:-) ~mez~
Moonjava 2005-08-12 ch 1,	abuseThis is just amazing. I love the simplicity in this and the wonderful details.
The Melissa Occult 2005-08-12 ch 1,	abuseWhat's with this? I looked at your poems, and you didn't write any love poems! hah, anyways, I publish most everything I write as just 'general' because I'm too uncreative and hate assigning things to groups. This should just decide their own destiny. when you condemn a poem to a certain group, then you only get selective readers reading it. Anyways, I liked this, can't say I really like eating sugar all that much though. It reminded me of Def Leppards 'pour some sugar one me'. Perhaps you had certain things hidden in this? Wonderful day,S.P.
Aquafied 2005-08-12 ch 1,	abusei am awestruck about how beautiful this is.its so clever and witty, but smooth and divine, oh your rich detail.so hard to figure what its about, but you can see the sugar within,suede shoes.oh how lovely, awesome poem.
Werewolf Nighteyes 2005-08-12 ch 1,	abuseWow. Powerful imagery, and it paints a beautiful picture in the mind of the reader. Great job!

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