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Reviews For: Jasmine and Shadows

Mage Dudette
2005-09-04
ch 1,
abuseoo, crystal rain! i like that, n u have lovely imagery here too.
Noelle Vanessa Dor
2005-08-12
ch 1,
abusei like the focus on color in your imagery. makes the poem like a painting condensed into words. like art should be, it is a scene of beauty and worthy of admiration, but doesn't demand intense analysis or interpretation, at least not right away. by your categorization of the poem under the genre of "spiritual", i suppose there was indeed some deeper inspiration??

nice piece.
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