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| Smoky Bear 2005-11-15 ch 1,  | abusethere is a languid pace to this that works effectively. lovely, vivid imagery |
| Achlys Dyes Poetry 2005-10-24 ch 1, | abusereally like the last line of this one, the whole thing gave me a really content feeling, i dont know, muchly nice |
| AchtungBabyAchtung 2005-09-12 ch 1, | abuseSweet. It sort of reads like a art house cartoon to me if that makes sense. iz xx |
| Calum 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abusetop notch |
| jackharrup 2005-08-12 ch 1, | abuseWeird..I was just halfway through this when I received an email saying you'd reviewed me. Coincidence? haha. This is very relaxed, I like the line "Today I slowly melted with joy." Gorgeous. Nice job. |