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| Haberdasher 2005-08-12 ch 1,  | abuseDude...not a morning person i take it? hehe. nevermind, its good stuff, i like how calm it gets in the middle as well, and how the loud music and sunshine contrast the snake imagery. -The Lady Elaine |
| Slowly Sinking 2005-08-12 ch 1, | abuseWow. Very powerful piece, very emotive. The repetition works well and you keep your reader engaged. I love the ending especially; keep it up. |
| a duel of pens 111 2005-08-12 ch 1, | abusewhoa...i like it! its...creepy and maazing. one of my favs! |