Aww, cute ^^ I can't wait to read what happens next ^^ :D keep up the great work please

Souds like Susan and Jamie are becoming good friends. At least now she has someone to talk to about her double life.

Don't continue it. The story is written beautifully for a one-shot. If you continue, you send the story down a direct path. By leaving as-is, you leave it open to reader's imaginations.

Very different from your usual stuff Shane. Different, but good. I like the fact that these two know each other somewhat away from the bar, and that they are willing to talk things out before going anywhere else. I hope you WILL continue this tale!

Nice little story. Simple and straight forward, in a good way.

as always, I love reading your work, I would really enjoy it if this was continued.

I like it. it looks like it whould be a good multey chapter story. Allthow it whould be a good one shot.