I adore this. I really, really do. Alice in Wonderland is one of my favorite stories ever, so I kinda screamed when I saw that, lol. You're such a good writer!
Btw...Great and Terrible Beauty...saw that on your profile. I love that book. :3
Wow. That's just... amazing. I love the wording of this, and the symbolism also. And I liked the allusion to Alice in Wonderland. Very nice job on this. Keep up the good work!