I am jealous. I really am. The emotion in this is overpowering. I'm rather speechless, actually. You've taken feelings that I have fought continuously to capture on paper (or keyboard) and expressed them to a higher extent than I would have thought possible. I do believe I may become addicted to your work, and this is the only thing of yours I've read. Captivated and stunned to a point beyond understanding, Lyn

a person so young and yet mature enough to cause a spark of jealousy in me... it's really good... the character's thoughts are well organized... perhaps, i may never find out who the person keeping your character alive is, but i can make my own guess... it's also admirable how your character isn't too far gone that all she sees is the negative in everything... thanks for writing this coz it made me feel better...