"I want to rip the impermeable veil from your eyes to reveal your splendor" I LOVE that line. Wow. So picturesque and emotionally effective. This is a beautiful poem, because of the wording, but even moreso because of the topic you chose. I really appreciate this kind of serious work. Good job.

Oh, darling, that was so touching.. I saw this on the Just In list and I was like "HEY! I KNOW HER!" and gosh darnet, you silly goose, you ought to know just by the subject that I love this.. It brought tears to my zombie-eyes (heh heh no sleep). This really means a lot. Arg. Darling, I love you :)

Mwah. Great poem. :)

-s&m. hehe. le marie.