I am absolutely flabbergasted at how easily you create your imagry. This would make an amazing song! The part I like best is 'A tearless grief, a restless sleep' because of the paradox it creates.

I love the line:

"There is no curfew for the soul."

Very nicely done; your words are well chosen and put together nicely as well.

I really loved the way you add these punches, some metaphors in each stanza." A satelite mistaken for a shooting star"I think that's really neat how that one line you created can have an even deeper meaning like, it could mean (how i see it)How our society is today, nature becoming more and more pushed aside, technology becoming our replacements ect.I don't care much for the The stanzas " I know , I know no! I don't"I like how the fold fits in though , but the rest of it.Reminds me of an emo song. Not to be sarcastic, or rude. You'v written other poems with that feel behind it. You also made fun of it in a poem sometime back though.Just doesn't flow with the rest of the poem to me...takes something away.My opinion though. Anyways, my favorite line in this poem is "There is no curfew for the soul"THat is completly original, and so unqiue.It's one of those lines where you just have to rearead twice to really just,think about it.Very nice line and the way you used the imagery, shawdows, the street lights to put the mood. Oh man.The first and the third stanzas are what makes this poem great.THe rest eh. Just how i see it.Anyways, doesn't mean i don't like this poem. Nice : )

Beautifully written. You captured the emotion well, but I could still hear the music playing in my mind, lol. Great job! Keep writing, you're really good! :-)