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| Loveless To Self 2005-10-06 ch 1,  | abuseTHIS one was excellent. Everything ryhmed very well and the best part is it never stopped making sense. (like so many OTHER poems...) |
| grip 2005-09-30 ch 1, | abusevery smooth rhyming (except for the 4th line). well done |
| Ewen Lythrum 2005-08-18 ch 1, | abusewow...so pretty. really sad, but that's how it's supposed to be ((right?)) so good! for some reason, this reminds me of the book Rebecca... only, the corpse was in a boat, and not by the tree... but really good poem, i love it! ~curlish |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-08-15 ch 1, | abuseLovely. Full of memories fleeting. |
| youzi 2005-08-14 ch 1, | abusethe sorrow was expressed nicely in this piece..in a ghost-like (dreamlike?) way...do keep writing =D |
| La Gitane 2005-08-14 ch 1, | abuseVery beautiful. This has a simply lovely feel to it, the words are gorgeously chosen - they are all so soft and melifluous - and it really gives it a very gentle, and very sad tone. Thy style also, is very sweetly sad (madly enough, the syntax reminds me of something out of Tolkien), and it really is a lovely, haunting poem. |
| AlwaysAmberella 2005-08-12 ch 1, | abusewow. Wow. Very awesome. and I thank you for your support. Solo. |