Oh, this is great. Straight into the drama and action, and now a cliffhanger. Please write more. It's a little gory, (heh heh, a little!) but I don't really mind that, and behind the blood I see an excellent story line, and the moral of messing with the emotions and drugs and all that.

Wow... that was really good. Gory, but good. ::grin::

This is a really interesting story... very spazzy. I now command you by force of my army of monkeys to write more.

-spazzy cow-

Wow. That was cool. All bloody and stuff. I liked the part with the scientists; manipulating the emotions. I would love to do that. Think of the people we could drive insane. Oh, yeah. Anyway, another great work. You, my cyber, soon to be friend, are a great writer.

-Robin

Very spazztasically action packed. A love potion gone wrong perhaps? Interesting...Your use of description is very nice. Just enough without making it boring.I like, I like...

spazzy

Nice beginning once again, Saxon. I'm hooked.

spazzy