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| McShortShort 2008-08-18 ch 1,  | abusehaha this would make an awesome story |
| The.Vampire.Doll. 2008-07-30 ch 1, | abuseoh my goshers. the panther is SNEAKY. |
| Somewhere InBetween Hi and ... 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuselmao! oh GOD that SUCKS!! xD that's hilarious! |
| Jackache.11 2008-03-19 ch 1, anon. | abusevery nice one-shot. well written too. =) |
| pheonixorion10 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseok i know im really sorry you yet again have to explain something to my oh so slow mind em what did he do when he ruffled her hair and what an a hole jeez |
| floopfloop 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuseOMG!! wat a jerk. i hope she knee's him in the place where it'll hurt. he deserves it. wat a bastard |
| Wry 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuseOh my God. That Jerk. |
| Boo 2007-12-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseI knew this was coming! that her crush will be some sort of a dick! it is actually extremely unpleasant and disappointing to have met with such situations in life. wow, we have proverb in russian, which would fit perfectly here, but i have no idea how to interpret it the way it sounds in my native language^_^ anyway, nice job, the story was pleasant to read=) |
| marii 2007-09-11 ch 1, | abuseI feel bad for her but can't help but laugh. He is a jerk! I wish there's a sequel |
| gulistanlik 2007-08-14 ch 1, | abuseWhat an asshole! Stupid git! He bloody framed her. They could have just left the book or something. I hope Evie gives them a piece of her mind! Or a taste of their own medicine. Nice one-shot by the way! I liked it! He certainly is a panther, no? Gulistanlik |
| BlackPetal 2007-07-06 ch 1, | abuseYes, it's me. The one who kinda, I don't know, died while doing your editing on The Contract. But, hey, what can I say? I don't remember if I told you or not (probably not), but at the time, something came up so I couldn't edit anymore for you. Anyway, as for this story... It's cute and I happened to enjoy it. There was one mistake but I refuse to go back and look for it because it wasn't that bad. Your story overall was good and I must admit that you've gotten better since the last time I've read one of your stories and I must applaud you for that (I'm talking about, by the way, your latest story, Seizing the Sky). As of now, I'm (finally!) writing the one story I've been putting off for the last year and a half and I do believe it's going to be pretty good. If you want to you can check it out when I post it, but of course that's all up to you. 'Til next time Bleeding Air! I liked it, I liked it a lot. Of course, I like more or less all your writings. |
| sushi 2007-05-13 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was so messed up, i loved it |
| Our Lady Silence 2007-05-08 ch 1, | abuseBASTARD. |
| behind these tears 2007-02-26 ch 1, | abuseOMG! I did not expect that to happen. What a jerk! Poor Evie. Once again, wonderful one-shot! |
| reona 2006-12-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat a jerk |