LOVED IT...and i would love a sequel...but if you don't write one then that's fine...

I don't care where it came from...I love it...

well done!

damn this is starting to get really fun!

PREGNANT! hell yes

this chick has issues, she should make sweet love to him =D

well then what did happend, they had sex, loveliefull, but why the regret?

damn girl this sure is something!

heyo, mazzy, ur makin me emo with this ending, must be more!! *tear*
miss ya lots, we gotta hang out, u know it as well as i do.
(and i lost my phone and got a new one last month...)

This was just beautiful! I loved it! And for such a short piece you did really really well in the way of plot and character development. I'm on to read more!

I like it. The shifting back and forth through time wasn't difficult to read and and really liked the end. A nice short, little story that flowed well and was a good read. Nice job.

MUCH LUV JEMI! good job i'm glad you edited it a little to make it a chaptered fic. so wait...caroline = roricharlie = loganmom = lorelaiscott = luke?taylor = taylor?

lol i'm proud of u!!

::Throws tons of starbucks coffee beans.:: I've finally read it and I like it. I like it a lot. ^-^

Actually, I like where you've left it. It was simple, but perfect, and very cute. I liked the fact that it wasn't overly sappy, overly romantic, it was just...real. Thanks for the read!

I think it's cute and sweet and can be left right there..