God chapter.. I dont really know what to say about it. i cant wait to see how everything works out

This was a pretty cool story. If you ever get it published let me know so I can be the first to buy a copy of it. Do you have yahoo IM? If so send me your screenname so we can stay in touch ok? Well hope to hear from you soon and read more of your writtings TTYL

Oh yeah and another... maybe show dreams...all of a sudden Christina said he was the man in her dreams and the reader didnt even know she was having them... If thats what you wanted fine... just a lil confusing

The story is coming along pretty good. I cant wait to see more. I have one suggestion to make and that is as the other two girls get their memories back if they do, maybe show some of the realtionship they had with the brothers... just a suggestion I think it would make their bond stronger in the current time. Great character development and plotting.. you got me hooked