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KhaestaAradia 2005-08-13 . chapter 1
Great poem.. I dont know what to say, except I think we all feel that way sometimes
grim-dreamer 2005-08-13 . chapter 1
Hey, I love the build-up! you've constructed Mystery well in this poem and I sensed this pleasant sort of desperation in it, particularly when you dropped in the odd rhyme. Very good.
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