I like the style you've continued to use almost flawlessly. Gorgeous tone.

Hi,hi,hi, there! I was looking through my "favourites" list and saw that you were up there; so, I decided to see what new stories you had going on. Very nice. Def. a good start. The sexual tension is clearly evident (as it is in all romances), and it kinda makes you gooey (but not like Hitler's love child). Come back to lunch soon! ->J.

Nothing seems to be working. It's not loading any new messages and nothing happens when I refresh. :(

Maybe you'll get this. Tell me where to write.

Argh! I don't need this right now ... and my boiler isn't working properly either so the house is freezing. Ugh.

*curls up on your lap*

you just write beautifully.

i love it- its dreamy and poetic. my mind can project your words into images.

a dash of humor is like the icing on top of a delicious cake. i notice the slight sexual tension- it's like the flower icing.

love it. i must devour it. lol :)

keep writing. update soon.

damn. thats deep.

i like it

you are a truly beautiful writer.this makes me swoon and cry and rip away everything, on the inside.

romance so simple and sweet.oh so good.

you writing is awesome.

I really like it. I hope you continue!

I don't know why but I have this really strange addiction to this new fic. I think it's really cute- and erotic at the same time.

Quoting people is kinda creepy sometimes but I just HAVE to do it! '“Come and get your shoes, Marcy.” I said, and when you slammed open my door, I made certain you slammed into my arms.' Aw... I love the way you use those words...

Keep writing.. post another chapter up soon! =)

I like this style. It's kinda dreamy and poetic, like I'm on the outside looking in or something.

i like this story, its interesting

this is almost enchanting, a pull towards it that makes it dreamy. great job with this chapter.

Quite poetic. '“Come and get your shoes, Marcy.” I said, and when you slammed open my door, I made certain you slammed into my arms.' So simple but effective. The line's a stunner. Nice conclusion. Interesting use of brackets through it.

'I had loved you to sleep.' seems quite a strange line. Initially I didn't read it as a guy's narrative because it didn't sound much like one. Otherwise, it's a good piece. Much applause to 'nowhere' origins.

hah, this reminds me of a college romance.so simple yet complicated.and real.

awesome chapter.