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| Islandbreeze 2005-08-30 ch 1, | abuseThis was lovely, very intense and concentrated, and metaphorical in a way...I loved the way it repeated the first sentence at the end. It was great, your friend should get an account! Very nice |
| Earthsong12 2005-08-14 ch 1, | abuseVery sad, and very beautiful. AsA, tell him to get a fp account and post more!!~earthie |
| PearlinTheMist 2005-08-14 ch 1, | abuseholy... ::stares in shock and awe::. What a story! I write as well but only when in a fit of passion can I write something like that, and never that well worded, never that full of emotion. |