I think your friend doesn't need to beg. He is a good writer to reason it out.

:)

This was lovely, very intense and concentrated, and metaphorical in a way...I loved the way it repeated the first sentence at the end. It was great, your friend should get an account! Very nice

Very sad, and very beautiful. AsA, tell him to get a fp account and post more!!~earthie

holy... ::stares in shock and awe::. What a story! I write as well but only when in a fit of passion can I write something like that, and never that well worded, never that full of emotion.