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Reviews For: Wasting Time For An Ideology Of Faith

Twilight Starr
2008-03-24
ch 1,
Interesting, unique piece. Nice work. Good luck with poetry and life. Have a lovely day.

~Twilight Starr~
Matt Sheard
2005-08-23
ch 1,
A good poem, gets across your argument well, though that's not to say I agree with it whole heartedly. Very thoughtful.

Matt
1941
2005-08-14
ch 1,
Okay that second line, totally rocked. I didn’t really get your poem, I really would like to. I mean I understood it as in the words computed in my brain, but maybe there is a motivation behind this. Whatever that motivation is, it doesn’t come across in the poem. This failing really detracts from the beautifully harsh quality. Though verbose, I felt that it suited this well. Really what was the inspiration behind writing this?
Stylo
2005-08-13
ch 1,
I like the poem. Can't say I agree with the mesaage, but I think I'm in love with the way you've placed the entire thing. *heart flutters about the room*

I honestly love the poem. I'd add to my favourites, but I think I've already used the 30-max storage limit. Pah. Can't it be more like ff.net?

Gorgeous poem, I repeat. Really amazing. The ending is beautiful.

Why don't you post the next poem on a topic we can both agree on? =)

the12yearold
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