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| Twilight Starr 2008-03-24 ch 1, | Interesting, unique piece. Nice work. Good luck with poetry and life. Have a lovely day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Matt Sheard 2005-08-23 ch 1, | A good poem, gets across your argument well, though that's not to say I agree with it whole heartedly. Very thoughtful. Matt |
| 1941 2005-08-14 ch 1, | Okay that second line, totally rocked. I didn’t really get your poem, I really would like to. I mean I understood it as in the words computed in my brain, but maybe there is a motivation behind this. Whatever that motivation is, it doesn’t come across in the poem. This failing really detracts from the beautifully harsh quality. Though verbose, I felt that it suited this well. Really what was the inspiration behind writing this? |
| Stylo 2005-08-13 ch 1, | I like the poem. Can't say I agree with the mesaage, but I think I'm in love with the way you've placed the entire thing. *heart flutters about the room* I honestly love the poem. I'd add to my favourites, but I think I've already used the 30-max storage limit. Pah. Can't it be more like ff.net? Gorgeous poem, I repeat. Really amazing. The ending is beautiful. Why don't you post the next poem on a topic we can both agree on? =) the12yearold |