 alayahop 2007-11-12 . chapter 14WOW. I really like the plot and your style. It would be a shame if you left this story unfinished. So please please please update |
 Twilight Starr 2007-09-09 . chapter 14Good chapter.
Looking forward to more. :)
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 Twilight Starr 2007-09-09 . chapter 13The drama and the fluff is so cute. ^^
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 Twilight Starr 2007-09-09 . chapter 12Good chapter although it consisted of mostly lyrics.
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 Twilight Starr 2007-09-09 . chapter 11Interesting chapter.
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 Twilight Starr 2007-09-09 . chapter 10Good chapter.
Nice cliffhanger.
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 Twilight Starr 2007-09-09 . chapter 9Good chapter.
Nice cliffhanger.
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 Twilight Starr 2007-09-09 . chapter 7Awesome chapter.
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 Twilight Starr 2007-09-09 . chapter 6Lovely chapter.
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 Twilight Starr 2007-09-09 . chapter 5Great chapter.
Nice cliffhanger.
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 Twilight Starr 2007-09-09 . chapter 4Amusing chapter.
When someone speaks in a foreign language you should probably italicize the words.
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 Twilight Starr 2007-09-09 . chapter 3Amusingly good chapter.
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 Twilight Starr 2007-09-09 . chapter 2Good chapter.
I like Fiona. She's a cool character.
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 Twilight Starr 2007-09-09 . chapter 1Secret admirers are always cute. Well, most of the time.
This story has potential.
Good luck with writing and this story.
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 Coda Lovelance 2006-09-02 . chapter 14Finally, i've been waiting for an update! This chapter was a little hard for me to follow, but i think the sheer fact that it's been so long since i've read any BIBW material, that i may've forgotten the characters/storyline a bit. But, gorgeous chapter, i really like how you portrayed the idecisiveness of Fiona. *nods* Keep writing, update soon! |